Back to Life!

In the craziness that has become my life, I’ve neglected this blog. I aim to change that!

I’ve been considering adding a few chapters of each of my newest projects, so that my readers get a glimpse of what’s to come. This would include the revamped Hardship & Devotion and the new works: Unexpected Choices, The Irish Bred Series, and The Mystical Forest Series. Why go through all this trouble?

As I work on these works, I’ve found that with my excitement in writing them, I have a need to share just a little bit of them. I hope people become as excited about them as I am. Many authors have done just this, or in the least, shared their thought process as they revised and edited their works. I get a kick out of reading their posts and I’d like to do the same for all of my followers. To ensure that I don’t give too much away on either novel, I’ll only be showing off the first two chapters of each work. I’ll be doing this in the beginning of the New Year of 2014, so keep an eye out! 🙂

I wish you all a very blessed New Year!!!!

Revising Creative Writing Works

While writing my second novel, Unexpected Choices, I am finding that revision is one part of completing a manuscript that I might despise more so than editing. After reading the majority of my novel I have found that the middle–you know, the important part of a novel–feels wrong and I do not like it one bit. I’ve decided that it would be best to change the story line a little and revise a hefty portion on my novel.

This has become a driving force that has me disliking writing and that is just something we cannot have. 🙂 I pulled out my old textbook to see if I could find any answers to the many questions that I’ve been having about this piece, and found a bit on revision that I not only found helpful, but might help any of you that might be having similar issues.

In The Practice of Creative Writing: A Guide for Students-2nd Edition, by Heather Sellers, it not only shared my feelings of dread that comes with revision, but also gave some good questions to ask when reading your first draft of any creative writing piece.

QUESTIONS TO ASK: Reading First Drafts of Creative Writing

Focus on these aspects of the piece to help the writer identify revision strategies.

  1. What images are most transporting? Where did you “see”?
  2. Are there sections where you were confused?
  3. Where are the places of greatest energy? Least energy?
  4. What is/are the essential tension(s) in the piece?
  5. What additional examples of tension does the writer employ (or do you employ)?
  6. What oppositions could be made more tense?
  7. Is the dialogue efficient, realistic, tense?
  8. What small and large insights does the piece offer or imply?
  9. What patterns can you find? Are there places pattern could be enhanced?
  10. What structure does this piece use? Are there any structural weaknesses?

While these questions are focussed on someone else reading your work, that does not mean that you cannot ask these questions yourself–of your own work. I’ve done this, and it’s helped me tremendously in discovering where the strengths and weaknesses were in my novel. I now know where I need to focus my revision. Of course revision might come in more than one draft, but it’s an important step before going into the editing portion of writing any creative writing piece.

I hope this can be helpful for you all as well.


My Interview With Thomas Rydder

Below is an interview that a good friend of mine, Thomas Rydder posted on his blog: I thought I’d share it with all over you as well.

Thanks again Thomas!

TR: Hey, good morning, McKaylin…I’m so pleased to have you today!

MK: Good morning, Thomas, and thanks very much for having me..

TR: Let’s get this thing going. How old were you when you wrote your first piece?

MK: I was 24.

TR: What was it, and in what genre?

MK:Actually, my first book is my current one, Hardship and Devotion, and it’s a fiction piece about love and romance.

TR: I get to interview a brand new writer…very cool! What made you write it?

MK: As a teenager I became an avid reader. I even attempted writing my first novel at the age of 15 but never finished it. At the beginning of this year, I was taking a Career Skills course in my journey toward receiving my Associates in Medical Billing/Coding. In this course, they focus on what career path you are most likely to find yourself happy in. I soon realized that my true passion was for the written word and upon finish my Associates, decided to pursue my dream and signed up for online classes with Southern New Hampshire University for a Bachelors in Creative Writing-Fiction-English. By June 2012, I had an outline drawn up for my first novel and it’s now finished.

TR: Congratulations! Very nice…so, are you working on anything now?

MK: Yes, actually. I am currently writing my second novel, Unexpected Choices, which I hope to publish by mid-year of 2013. It also will be a love and romance novel.

TR: Wonderful! What was the inspiration for “Hardship”?

MK: I would have to say my inspiration for Hardship and Devotion, would have to be my husband, Joseph Felton. When we met, I was a single mother who’d somewhat given up on the dream of meeting that special someone and being happily married. He taught me what it was like to feel true love, to show me that there was such thing as a gentleman still out there, and that it was possible for another man to love another man’s child as his own. I guess in summary, the love we share between us has become my inspiration to write love and romance novels.

TR: If that’s not inspiration, I don’t know what is. So, tell us a little about it, and where it’s available.

MK: Hardship & Devotion is a story filled with lust, passion, and love; while also showing the pain, angst, and loss that comes from losing those we love. It’s a shory the provokes the readers’ own memories of their hardships, while reminding them that true love and honest devotion, hardships can be overcome.

In the story, Cara Edwards and David Bryington find themselves finding their way back to the comfort of their childhood town, Evergreen, Colorado. In their journeys, they search for peace of mind and a way to end their suffering after having their hearts broken by those they’d loved. The intensity of their attraction for one another is alarming to the both of them, and they soon find themselves unable to ignore it. What they had first thought was lust, grows into something much deeper and far more passionate. When Cara is involved in a tragic accident, David is forced to analyze his feelings, in turn changing everything. The new-found feelings that are brought to the surface, are both terrifying and thrilling to them both, and soon find themselves falling into something deeper – love. Just as they think the worst is over, their devotion for one another is tried time and time again. Unwelcome hauntings from their past come back, threatening to tear them apart. They are forced to open old wounds that they had only just begun to close, knowing it’s the only way for them to move forward.

It will be available on Trafford Publishing’s website, and 20,000 other online websites like,, and I should have all the available links within the next month and will be posted on my goodreads, facebook, and twitter accounts.

TR: Whew. That sounds like compelling stuff…tell me, is there a particular place or setting where you get your writing ideas?

MK: I feel very fortunate to say that my ideas come to me at random, and I’ve learned to write them down for future novels. Sometimes I will dream of them, though other times I can be at the grocery store and a good story line will pop into my head.

TR: Don’t you just love that? Good idea to keep pen and paper handy, eh? Now, what made you choose either traditional or independent publishing?

MK: I chose independent publishing because I wanted to see how well my first novel does. I am also still in the process of finishing my BA in Creative Writing and known that as I near my graduation date that my writing will improve. I do plan on trying for traditional this time around, but if it doesn’t work then I’ll go for independent again. It’s been an eye-opening experience working with the Trafford Publishing team and everyone has been so helpful.

TR: Good plan. Here’s a good one…if you had to choose the most important element in an author’s platform, what would it be?

MK: I think the most important element of an author’s platform is exposure. I had no idea how much networking would benefit me, and I’m so grateful I decided to start prior to my novel being finished. I will admit, hearing my cell phone ding with incoming emails, tweets, comments and messages, along with keeping up on responding, can be overwhelming at times, but it’s helped in reaching out to my future audience. You can pay plenty of money to independent publishing companies to advertise and promote your novel, but there is also much you can do yourself—for free—with your time and effort. The main thing you can do is put yourself out there, and with the internet connections available today, there are so many tools out there to help do just that. Publishing a book isn’t going to guarantee sales if people don’t know your book exists, especially with how many novels are publishing every year.

TR: Perfect advice…thank you. Now, what mistakes have you made in regards to publishing and marketing your work, and what will you do differently in the future?

MK: The biggest mistake I made was putting so much faith in the editing system that Trafford Publishing included in my publication package. I quickly learned that I could have saved time in the editing process had I originally combed through their corrections and suggestions with a fine toothed comb. I sent it on to publication too soon, causing more correction sessions than should have been necessary. In the future, I will make sure that I look over my work carefully and pay a little extra in terms of editing. Don’t always assume that an editing service will catch all the errors.

TR: Now I really hope folks out there are listening :) . Please, tell us a bit more about your next book…

MK: As I mentioned earlier, Unexpected Choices, in the new novel I’m working on. It’s about life’s way of throwing obstacles in our way, forcing us to make those unexpected choices we’d never thought we’d have to face. Yes, there will be a love story in the mix, one that I hope the readers can relate to.  In reality, love stories aren’t the way depicted in novels. In reality, love is tried, trust and loyalty is hard to find, and people get hurt. I want my novels to show the trials that all couples today face and that it is still possible to have a successful relationship if the two people involved are willing to work for it. I firmly believe, “True love, in its most pure form is worth every ounce of blood, sweat, and tears that goes into finding it and keeping it alive. No one should be fooled into thinking love is easy, that relationships are easy, or that those we love won’t hurt us. The truth is, life is brutal, and it’s how we react to those awful situations that will depict the rest of our lives.”

TR: Nicely done. McKaylin, it’s been a true pleasure. Best of luck with “Hardship and Devotion”, and in all your writing. Go get that degree!

That’s it for today, folks. “Hardship and Devotion” is out there, just waiting for you. What are you waiting for?